Rough Cut Feedback From Peers

Before veiwing the rough cut we were expecting the story of the drunk girl as a key focus of their music video. The rough cut didn't show the storyline that had been pitched and instead had a basic storyline of two guys in the woods. However, we enjoyed the editing of the video with the 4 panels of video, and the words flashing up on screen were good on timing.

looks alot like this http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pyRRJz4P7ZE


The location of woodland for the setting of their video is lacking with imagination, in the sense of what they could achieve with the narrative of the song.


Editing

• Text coming up on screen was bland, in the pitch it was compared to All Of The Lights by Kanye West, you could take ideas from that and change the font for each set of words to provide variety and possibly add more effects.

Mise En Scene

• Location could be more imaginitive as it is fairly basic for the whole video.
• Mise En Scene could match the narrative.

Camerawork

• Good use of shots as it is what is expected from your final product. These shots are good practice for a good idea of what your final piece will look like.

Genre Elements

• The images on screen match the genre. The actors look like they are fitting the mood of the song without going over the top. 

Performance

• Again, the performance lacked imagination as it was just two people walking around in the woods, it would be good if it could fit with the words a bit more so the words reflect what is being shown on screen, but its good for a rough cut.